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【盘点】雅思写作十大“见官死”失败开头

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1楼2013-07-06 11:00回复
    万事开头难?雅思作文开头难?也不是你胡乱拼凑开头的理由。本文为你总结十大“见官死”的失败开头。看你中招了没有?赶紧知错就改吧。可不要死的冤枉哦。


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      典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
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      In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
      Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!


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