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【圣帝颂歌的打开方式】The ode of the sage. By. えんそ

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现在只有一章啦还是一次创作无修改版的~具体德文、录音版和修正版えんそ言可能会之后呈上~中文小氯也会努力奉上~大概会吧⋯⋯大概吧⋯⋯


IP属地:美国1楼2013-09-03 09:57回复
    The ode of the sage
    <1>
    When the human were still uncivilized, when people still lived under the shadow of the hollow (hueco), when the human had to prey for surviving from the soul
    reapers.
    The sage befell of the world.
    He walked like a black phoenix in the sky.
    And he sewed the white light to people.
    Then the human studied to use arrow to fight with the hollow and created their
    colour in their eyes in the black sky.
    'What the colour is?' People asked as children who tried to know the world.
    'The colour between the clouds is 'Blue', which stand for our life and love.'
    So the human gained the emotions between you and me like the sage remained in
    their souls.
    But then, the soul reapers raped with people.
    They could not tolerate that the human had power to revolt and went against their grain.
    Afterwards, they gave people horror like what the hollow did.
    So the saviour held the flag to bring us to the battle and spirited inspirations.
    The human fought with their horror and death valiantly.
    By this way, they knew their weakness and ugly.
    They were falling down like the towers under the black blades, holding by the
    smiling soul reapers, and begged the help from the sage.
    Our saviour stood up again.
    The battle stayed many days, mouths and years.
    The sky turned to black and returned to white many times.
    Under the black, people were sheltered by the sage's manteaux; and repulsed the
    hollow and soul reapers in their daytime.
    When the day the human won, they saw the blue and clouds again, which was their
    saviour's body.
    They had never lived under the funk again.
    Because the human understood that they could create their dreams and control the life and death by their own hands.
    But for their freedom, the sage sank into repose.
    'I have never given up you since I looked your pain.
    'I will wake up sooner or later. So within this time, my blood becomes your
    pretext; my hair turns into your arrow; the sow you hold is my bone; my shadow
    is always your shelter; my legs give your speed. The whole world will supposes
    you and sends you power.' The sage said as the wind.
    'So I will always stand with you, and my eyes are staring at you like the stars.'
    <1 end>


    IP属地:美国3楼2013-09-03 11:14
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      小氯酱看到我的回复了么?


      IP属地:广东4楼2013-09-03 11:40
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        えんそ说这个就是写著玩的,大概总共会有两到三章,总之很短的样子,估计很快就完了~不过えんそ好像是在补漫画ing⋯⋯大概要把现存的多数情节都写进去似的⋯⋯大工程啊~
        这一章今天是没时间出翻译了~大概就是说千年之前圣者降临协助人们驱除虚和死神,并且在长眠之前说“吾之血为汝之盾,吾之发化作汝之箭,手中之弓自吾之骨,吾之骨用庇护世人,吾之腿与汝之速。世界之力拥汝助汝。吾之眼将如星凝视,久立汝侧。”
        顺便@云隐子 大神和 @老衲贾宝玉 吧主様


        IP属地:美国5楼2013-09-03 11:44
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          @氯酸钾高锰酸钾


          IP属地:广东6楼2013-09-03 12:01
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            中翻
            (1)
            方民於蛮荒之境,於世人存於虚之阴影,及人迫以乞幸存自死神之情。
            圣者临於世。
            其行於空若玄之凤,撒素之光与世之众生。
            则人习箭术抗与虚,创瞳中之色於黑天之中。
            “此色何名?”若初尝世事之稚。
            “於云间生与情之色为‘青’。”
            自此世人获之隙之情,若圣者赠予之物。
            而死神瞋目切齿於人获力及其逆行其志,固降惧於人若虚之事。
            圣者揭竿为旗,鼓舞之志,使人骁战惧与死。
            当事时,人知懦弱臃丑之态。
            如高塔般倾倒,乞神之救助。
            圣者二立於此。
            数久之战无穷无尽,看黑白夜昼日转星移。
            夜中庇护於圣者之衣下,战虚与死神於世人之白昼之时。
            胜之日,众人再见圣贤之身化之苍穹白云,自此生而无惧。
            世人顿悟人可创梦并控生死於自之臌胀。
            然圣贤沈入长眠为人之自由。
            “吾未弃众生自视如之痛苦。
            “吾将会起於某时,此日内,吾之血为汝之盾,吾之发化作汝之箭,手中之弓自吾之骨,吾之影永庇护世人,吾之股予汝之速。世间之力拥汝助汝。”圣者之音如轻风飘渺。
            “吾之眼将如星凝视,久立汝侧。”
            (1章完)


            IP属地:美国7楼2013-09-03 12:34
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              加精以激励小氯快更~


              IP属地:上海8楼2013-09-04 00:25
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                ,圣者降临驱逐虚和死神,额,结果圣者被死神给直接灭族了,这是怎么回事来者,,,,,,,


                IP属地:四川来自Android客户端9楼2013-09-04 08:37
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                  未修改的完结章超短,目前小氯还没有看到えんそ的修改版。
                  后两章的翻译版大概会在明天晚上周一出现。
                  德文版是个大工程,敬请期待!!
                  (3)
                  The people
                  who were lying low in the shadow, the sky will belong to your eyes soon.
                  The sealed
                  sage of the Quincy.
                  Fetched
                  back his heart beat on more after 900 years.
                  His
                  subjects stood up again.
                  Regained
                  his consciousness after 90 years.
                  His
                  children had never been fear since that.
                  Took back
                  his force after 9 years.
                  The
                  unwanted and piteous people transformed their sprites and bodies to the sage's
                  power.
                  Strengthened
                  the sage, the use they had.
                  The
                  subjects who were waiting for the probability in the dark, the light was going
                  to be recaptured by your hands late.
                  And
                  The sage
                  would get back his world after 9 days.
                  The chaste
                  people,
                  Please hold
                  up your bows with your hatred.
                  All along
                  with you, your sage and companions would be.
                  <end>
                  I


                  IP属地:美国11楼2013-09-15 14:00
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                    小氯无所事事了整个周末┳_┳/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~\("▔□▔)/∑(っ °Д °;)っ
                    (2)
                    圣者沈眠百年,众人仰视苍穹,星若圣者之瞳,星移闪烁。
                    再经百年,民筑之高塔欲同天国,愈靠近欲倾听。
                    又百年,人如圣者之愿,持弓矗於世界之颠,携勇敢与狂妄。
                    400年之休憩,以星为图腾,圆为天;救世主长久与星同在,将尘间拥於怀。
                    500年之长梦,圣者并未归来,死神与虚蠢蠢欲动。
                    600年之狂想,人试与圣者齐飞,不满停留於现状。
                    其生翅与飞鸟翱翔,羡鹰之眼,豹之速。
                    700年之追逐,人近忘其信仰,科学蚕食圣者之仁爱。
                    然,於第800年,死神反击,绝望天降,哀鸿遍野,萦绕不绝。(这里原文是えんそ表达错了,之后会更正)。
                    圣者却未降临。
                    人弃生之世界,挥泪长之土地,而在狭之影中再建社稷。
                    若存则无理糜。
                    天寒地冻镇之野心,藉此后顾。
                    900年之歇息,圣者到来。
                    时间改变道路及祈愿,信仰亘古相传。
                    圣者如初再顾,影之空漆黑如夜,却无星烁。
                    今圣者久视众生如鹰如星,再守护子民昼昼夜夜。
                    时间无法改变的是深沈、信念与决心。
                    (最后一句词穷了就直接用白话了啦~)
                    I


                    IP属地:美国12楼2013-09-16 07:10
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                      啊忘了还有一章⋯⋯
                      没时间了就也用白话了啊~
                      这一段えんそ偷懒了直接用漫画对白翻译了,但是大概是觉得熊猫的翻译太单调了吧~えんそ就转译了一下。
                      (3)
                      雌伏於影中人啊,天空很快将属於你们的双眼。
                      被封印的灭却师之圣帝,用900年取回了心跳。
                      他的人民重新站立起来。
                      圣帝用90年取回了意识。
                      他的子孙无需再恐惧。
                      圣帝用9年取回了他的力量。
                      不被需要的可怜之人啊,用他们的灵魂与肉体组成了圣帝的能力。
                      他们发现了自己的意义是为了强壮圣帝。(这里えんそ说要把had改成found)
                      在黑暗中伺机的圣帝之子啊,迟早会光明在握。
                      并且,
                      圣帝将用9天取回他的世界。
                      贞洁之人们啊,
                      请将仇恨与弓箭一起紧握。
                      你们的圣帝与同伴将永远相伴左右。
                      (えんそ是梦游的时候写的吗?!!)
                      (终於完了说好的修改和德文呢?!!)I


                      IP属地:美国13楼2013-09-16 07:26
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                        辛苦了


                        来自Android客户端14楼2013-09-16 11:03
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                          来了来了~~最后一段好带感啊!!请将仇恨与弓箭一起紧握。你们的圣帝与同伴将永远相伴左右。


                          IP属地:广东15楼2013-09-16 12:45
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