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【求助】麻烦给位大神,帮我看看我写的作文语法对不对!

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写作用girl,dress,white,nurse,housewife这些关键词写一篇短文。
下面是我写的作文。
My name is Cao jiaxian. My job's nurse,and I have a sister,she is at home.She is Ann.Ann is a housewife.One day,we are going to the park.We are look at a girl.Her dress's white.
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