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  • Tony2022
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Do Something for the Future
According to the recent report conducted by CCTV, the number of college graduate will amount to 7 ,250,000 in 2014.while the labor market cant receive so many students at one sitting. THat is to say when we all are going to get a job ,we have to face a great pressure.
Do something for the future。
The following ways can be adopted to find a appropriate job, which are competely effective, I believe
To begin with, make sure that what you are doing and learning is suitable with your interest.As the .say goes---Interest is the best teacher.Only in this way can we dedicated ourselives to study in the long term。
In addition, hard working also could lay a soild foundation for taking up an occupation.
In a word,for college student ,we should have the pratical spirit to dealing with the major,this way ,we can work by easy stages and undertake important tasks in the future.


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Do Something for the Future
According to the recent report conducted by CCTV, the number of college graduate will amount to 7 ,250,000 in 2014 and I strongly suppose that the jobs provided by job markets will be less than those graduates. That is to say, we will definitely face great pressure when we hunt for a job in the future.
How to avoid the big pressure in finding a job? As I can see it, we should do something now. To begin with, we need to be a hard-working student and try to solve all the problems that we meet during study and never give up. It is a way that makes us more persistent and confident. Secondly, some positive and hot interests should be trained at our spare time. Such as, learn some office softwares, make as more friends as possible and go some other places for travel. Last but not least, News from the whole world must be seen everyday.
In a word, only when we do something now for the future could we get a better job with less pressure then.


2025-08-30 12:46:55
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  • Tony2022
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@璧佃豹


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楼主,请帮我修改一下,最好再批个分数,多谢!!


  • 李一莹1
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这是题目


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The haze weather brought us much trouble.It makes people cough and sone accident happend,Because the driver coudln't saw clearly in the haze weather. Many schools of north of China have to cancer the P.E class. because the haze weather is baf for students health.
so,please don't drive car if you can.you can ride the bike go to work or school, andit good for your health.let us planty trees to protect our earth.


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You never know how strong you really are until being strong is the only choice
you have
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不到没有退路之时,你永远不会知道自己有多强大。


2025-08-30 12:40:55
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The Fish Net
Can you tell me what fish net is made, Ann?
A lot of little holes tied together with strings. replied the little girl.
鱼网
你能告诉我鱼网是什么做的吗,安? 老师发问道。
把许多小孔用绳子栓在一起就成了鱼网了。 小女孩回答道。


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可以帮我修改一篇作文嘛


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