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Good morning, my dear teachers.
It’s my pleasure to be given a chance for your interview. My name is Li Qi,I am 22 years old.
I come from LangFang, a very beautiful city. My undergraduate period will be accomplished in HeBei
university of Science and technology in July, 2016, and now, I am striving for obtaining a key to
staying here for another three years. Because of the pretty cherry blossom, What’s more,I worship the
knowledgeable teachers like you.
In the past two years I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination for it has been my
dream to be a postgraduate. Generally speaking, I am a hard-working student. I will try my best to
finish it no matter how difficult it is. I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of
Mechanics.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngsters I like reading books,
especially those about Mechanics of materials.Frequently I exchange with other people by making
comments in the forum on line.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning .If I am given a
chance to study Mechanics in my old school, I will concentrate on my study and make great efforts to
master this subject.
That is all, thank you for your attention.


IP属地:河北1楼2016-03-21 15:39回复
    Good morning, my dear teachers
    It is with pleasure that I am given a chance for this interview today. My name is Li Qi, I am 22 years old. I come from LangFang a very beautiful city, and I am currently an undergraduate student in HeBei university of Science and Technology, I expect to graduate in July of this year, but I am here, as this point of the interview, striving to stay for another three years for postgraduation studies.
    I love the environment here, especially the cherry blossom, and I have great admiration for the teachers and professors here. This plan for postgraduation examination is not a recent one, as I have been preparing for it since two years ago - so you can say that it is a long time dream of mine to be a postgrad.
    I am a hard-working and determined student, and I won't stop in the face of difficulties. Moreover, I am open-minded, quick in thought, and very fond of mechanics and technology. In addition to my studies, I have a broad list of interests which I pursue in my spare time, and my favorite of them all is reading. My favorite subject to read about, as you might have guessed, is mechanics and technology. Frequently, I engage in discourses on the forums on the Internet, exchanging ideas and asking questions amongst my peers.
    I strongly believe that one will easily lag behind unless one continues his learning and self-improvement. So if I am given a chance to continue my studies here as apostgraduate student, I will spare no efforts to obtain excellence and master the subject.
    That is all, thank you for your attention


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