i am a new man(welcome your advise )but i don't want criticze to much

i find i make mistakes in first floor. so embarrassed

so let our get into the improtant things.first, i introduced myself to you. i named tom.i best like reading.special scientific imagining story.i believe all of us know Three Bo dy, it is a interesting story.but to day,it is not my tropical.i am introduced a story named The Song of Sea.

The Song of Sea is talk about new life in the sea.and the hero's mother is a secret at beginning,it makes people to imagine what connection between he mother and new life.and why .the section is exciting and interesting,because it is connected with our life.for example it talks about eggs.

还有电影，

低级的语法错误也太多了..吓人