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各位大神,,,谁帮帮我?改改这篇作文。。。谢谢谢谢

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Different people have different life.Until now,I have made many friends.I donnot think any of them were extraoridinary but one.She likes a star shining in my heart.
She is my classmate in high school.She was disabled because of a severe disease which made her in agnoy.But she said,in her book,there is no"give up".She tried her best to counteract her defect.She gets up earlyer than any other people,beause she will spend more time than others.She setted her whole mind and heart on study to forget the pain.She never bended her head due to her handicap. She nerver said impossible,the word itself says:"I am possible."
She ever told me,when you want something ,all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it .Finally,she got the key to her ideal university.
The best and most beautiful thing in the world cannot be seen or touched,they mast be felt with heart.And you will find how wonderful she is.Never bend your head no matter what happened,always hold it high.Look the world straight in the face!


来自Android客户端1楼2016-10-20 23:14回复
    作文题目是什么?


    IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端5楼2016-10-21 05:29
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      第一句话改成Lifestyle varies.


      来自Android客户端6楼2016-10-21 05:40
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