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Day 6
大家现在还有一个拿不起来又放不下的问题,那就是四六级,可能有同学已经过了四级,准备六级,但是大部分同学在准备四级,所以今天我给大家一篇四级范文,我会把里面的所有内容都分析好,大家先好好看分析,先把所有的短语和句型掌握好,然后再背过全文,可以用一周的时间。
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views onthe importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180words.
图不太清楚,他们的对话是这样的,儿子说“Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”(爸爸,我有点担心核废料的处理问题),爸爸说“If you can empty the dustbin here,, you can do anything”(如果你能把这里的垃圾桶倒掉,你就能做一切事情)
思路点拨
写作提示中给出的“express your views on the importance of doing small things beforeundertaking something big”,就可以确定本题要求探讨的话题就是我们常说的“一屋不扫,何以扫天下”。在此,提醒广大考生,审题时一定要认真阅读写作提示,不要遗漏其中的重要信息。
本文的写作重点是论证图画中揭示出来的主题思想:做大事之前做小事也是很重要的。可以通过说理论证或者举例论证来展开。第一段简要描述图画的内容,即父子之间的对话,并指出图画暗含的观点;第二段针对图画的所表达的观点发表自己的看法;第三段总结全文。
范文
As is vividly revealed in the picture above,the boy expresses his worries about the disposing of nuclear wastes, while the father tells him to empty the dustbin in the room first.Undoubtedly, the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed in the picture is that it is vital and necessary to deal with trivial things before accomplishing anything significant.
图画作文的首句一定是固定表达方式,可以有很多种,这篇文章中推荐的只是其中一种,as is vividly revealed in the picture above“正如上图栩栩如生的展示出来的一样” ,express one's worries about sth "表达对某事的担忧",disposing “处理”, 这里用到了一个A of B的结构,翻译为B的A,所以叫做“核废料的处理”,在图中有两句话时,一般使用while来连接,句型就是“** do sth while ** do sth”(某人做某事而另外一个人做另外一件事)。第二个图表作文的固定句型是用来引出图画的寓意,undoubtedly,the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed in the picture is that it is vital and necessary to do sth (毫无疑问,这个图画所暗含的象征性意义是做某事是很重要的),symbolic "象征性的",subtly“微妙的,细微的”,conveyed “被表达的”,这句话的主语是the symbolic meaning, subtly conveyed 做定语,修饰meaning,动词是is,后面跟了一个that引起的表从,表从中it is vital and necessary to do sth, 做某事很重要,很必要。deal with "解决,处理",trivial “细小的,微不足道的”,accomplish “实现,完成”,significant “重大的”
First and foremost, doing small things may enable us to develop the good qualities required in achieving success, which lays a solid foundation for our future development. That is to say, it is very likely that these small things would make the difference between success and failure. In addition, there are many examples in which a multitude of high achievers become so outstanding just because they start from doing small things.Therefore, when it comes to this issue, what we must bear in mind is that doing small things before achieving big is of ultimate importance to our study, work, life and the society as a whole.
第二段是论证主题段,因为这篇文章涉及到成功的品质,因此我给大家写了一些句子,适用于所有论证对成功很重要的品质,这一段中,除了标出红色的部分要根据文章题目替换成主题词之外,其他句子都可以直接用到任何一篇文章中。first and foremost "首先",enable ** to sth “使某人能够做某事”,qualities“品质”, required in doing sth“做某事所需要的”,在这里做后置定语,achieve success “实现成功”,which引起非限制性定从,翻译为“这”,lay a solid foundation for sth"为...打下坚实的基础",that is to say“也就是说”,make a difference to “对...很重要”,in addition “另外”,there are many examples in which ...."有很多例子,在这些例子里......", a multitude of "很多",high achievers “成功人士”,therefore“因此”,when it comes to ..."当涉及到...", bear in mind "记住",be of ultimate importance“很重要”。
To sum up, for college students, to achieve goals needs not only the great ambition, but the practical spirit of dealing with trivial things from the beginning. Only in this way can we make the highest eminence and achieve the greatest accomplishmenst.
最后一段总结,说出题目的重要意义。
全文翻译:
正如上图栩栩如生的反映出来的一样,这个男孩在表达他对核废料处理问题的担忧,而他的爸爸告诉他,他应该先把房间里的垃圾桶先倒掉。毫无疑问,这幅图所表达出来的象征意义是在实现大的成就之前,解决小的事情非常重要。
首先,做好小的事情可以让我们能够形成好的品质,这些品质都是实现成功必须的,这给我们将来的发展打下坚实的基础。也就是说,很可能这些小事情对成功和失败很重要。另外,有很多的例子,其中,很多成功人士变得如此优秀就是因为他们都是从小事情做起的。因此,当涉及到这个问题时,我们必须记住的是,在做大事之前先做好小事对于我们的学习,工作,生活以及整个社会都很重要。
总之,对大学生而言,要想实现目标需要的不仅仅是志向,而且是从头开始做小事的务实的精神。只有这样,我们才能获得巨大的成功,实现伟大的成就。


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