Dear Martha，
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your patience and generous help during my difficult period.Since we became friends,you have spared no effort to help me every time I am faced with troubles. When I am sad and think of giving up something,it is your encouragement that makes me confident again and inspires me to fight with difficulties. Besides,you are a good listener. You are the first person that I can share everything with. And you always stand by my side.You may not know how much your patience and generous help means to me,it not only assists me in overcoming difficulties,but also brings confidence and warmth to me when I'm in trouble. What's more,your positive attitude to life has a good influence on me. Thank you again for what you have done for me.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
John
评语：单词拼写不错，仍需增加词汇积累；句法不错，可适当增加一些复杂的长句，句式变化较为明显；上下文衔接不流畅，结构不严谨
单词数量：151 句子数量：10 平均句长：17
拼写错误：0 四级词汇：141 六级词汇：8
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your patience and generous help during my difficult period.Since we became friends,you have spared no effort to help me every time I am faced with troubles. When I am sad and think of giving up something,it is your encouragement that makes me confident again and inspires me to fight with difficulties. Besides,you are a good listener. You are the first person that I can share everything with. And you always stand by my side.You may not know how much your patience and generous help means to me,it not only assists me in overcoming difficulties,but also brings confidence and warmth to me when I'm in trouble. What's more,your positive attitude to life has a good influence on me. Thank you again for what you have done for me.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
John
评语：单词拼写不错，仍需增加词汇积累；句法不错，可适当增加一些复杂的长句，句式变化较为明显；上下文衔接不流畅，结构不严谨
单词数量：151 句子数量：10 平均句长：17
拼写错误：0 四级词汇：141 六级词汇：8
