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儿子的故事

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Hi,这里小枫。儿子Jay/Jonathan大家可以从我之前的帖子里找到,但是为了方便,单独放一篇背景故事,希望大家喜欢~~~
Hi, my name’s Zane.
You asked for the story, right?
How my best friend suddenly turned into…a psychopath.
Jay was so…normal, I suppose. We hung out after school sometimes, and I’ve met his little sister, Annie. She was so innocent, in this town where so many things happened.
Deformity Town isn’t just a name. Most of the people here are considered “not normal”, enough to get them sent here.
Me? I can’t feel hunger. It’s nothing much, just that I have to remind myself not to starve. To be honest, it’s not that bad.
But I suppose some people, like Jayden, get the worst of it, having physical differences.
His eyes can still see properly, so why did they put him here?
Because he’s “not normal”, of course. Nobody here is normal.
His younger sister came here with him, because she had no choice. Sure, she was albino, but they didn’t really mind that. After all, there are plenty of albino people in the world.
We didn’t go to the same school, but I’ve heard from my other friends that he was bullied for his eyes, though all of the bullies have “deformities”, anyway.
I tried to talk to him more, and for a while, he was less quiet, and sometimes smiled at my jokes.
We grew closer, and became best friends when I was fifteen and he was fourteen.
But last month, when we were just walking along the street, he scared me.
His voice turned harsher, and his demeanor changed altogether.
“Zane, have you ever thought about getting out of here?”
I turned to look at him. “Yeah right, Jay…you know that’s impossible.”
He actually smiled, but it wasn’t that nice smile Jay sometimes gave me. It was sadistic, and insane, and scary.
Tech. We could just kill our way out of here. Nobody could technically stop us, except for those guards. Heh. Like I care about them.”
“Jay, we've been through this before. We’re deformed. That’s why we’re here. We’re different.”
His smiled turned even colder. “Isn’t that a good thing? It’s not like I care about how I look. We’ve been over this, and I think you were being a jerk.”
He had never insulted anybody before, not even the bullies, so that had made me mildly annoyed. “Jay, stop it. You’re being unreasonable.”
That’s not my name, you know.
I had stopped completely before sighing. “This isn’t funny, Jayden Starling.”
“I told you. That’s not my name.” He stopped too, to glare at me.
“Wait. Who are you, then?” Jay had scared me too much for a day, and I started to take him seriously, looking into his silver eyes.
Well, Zane, haven’t you heard of split personality? That was why they sent us here in the first place, just that we hid it. Hasn’t Jay told you yet? He must be really close to you then.” I could hear the sarcasm dripping off his voice as he said those words.
I shook my head. Jay had never said anything about this. He had always been quiet, shy, and too kind for this place.
In case you were wondering, I’m Jonathan. Much better than Jay, since he’s a coward.” He rolled his eyes, dismissing Jay.
That made me snap. “Don’t you dare insult my best friend!”
Oh really? You’re best friends? I thought best friends told each other all their secrets.” Jonathan sneered.
I froze. I suddenly realized something.
Annie.
What if…
I broke off the subject. “Does Annie know?”
Jonathan made a face. “Of course not! I’m not as careless as to show myself to that little girl. Jay made me promise.” He said that like it was a bad thing. I was pretty sure what would have happened if Jay were just a little less protective of his sister.
I sighed in relief, and Jonathan rolled his eyes again.
It’s not like I want to. I don’t like crybabies. That girl's just another brat.”
Then Jonathan choked, his eyes shutting and his hands curling into fists.
When he opened his eyes again, he was glaring at himself.
“Don’t you ever say that about Annie. Ever. Again.” Jay’s voice came back, softer, but this time filled with anger. He was talking to himself.
“Jay?” I questioned, worried.
He bit his lip, took one terrified look at me, and ran.
And then that was the last time I ever saw him.
You say on the news that he could sing, and that listening to him sing would make you insane.
But I’m telling you.
That wasn’t Jayden Starling.
That was Jonathan.
So leave him be.
背景故事End.
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IP属地:北京本楼含有高级字体1楼2019-05-17 21:02回复
    写的不错!期待后续!


    2楼2019-05-17 21:29
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      Cool


      来自iPhone客户端3楼2019-05-17 22:59
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        哇(⊙o⊙)哇 我吹爆


        来自Android客户端4楼2019-05-17 23:30
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          可能过一会发一下自己电脑上画的图.....非常差........
          好吧,请多多指教了.


          IP属地:北京5楼2019-05-18 19:44
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            好了.....其实上色了,但是这是小枫众多“草稿比结果好看”中的一张.....
            emmm......
            请多多指教啊啊啊!!!

            是的,我没有给他画上帽衫....
            有什么建议一定要说啊!谢谢诸位大佬!!
            !!


            IP属地:北京6楼2019-05-18 20:18
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              顺便说一句,Jay的刘海设定是百分之百固定的,Annie的跟他的差不多,就是碎一些,以后可能会发。


              IP属地:北京7楼2019-05-18 20:54
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                嗨,我叫赞恩。你要的是故事,对吧?我最好的朋友怎么突然变成了精神病患者。杰很正常,我想。我们有时放学后一起出去玩,我见过他的小妹妹安妮。在这个发生了那么多事情的小镇上,她是那么的无辜。畸形镇不仅仅是一个名字。这里的大多数人被认为是不正常的,足以让他们被送到这里。我吗?我感觉不到饥饿。没什么大不了的,只是我得提醒自己不要挨饿。老实说,没那么糟。但我想,像杰登这样的人,身体上的差异是最糟糕的。他的眼睛还能看得清楚,那他们为什么把他放在这里?当然,因为他不正常。这里没有人是正常的。他妹妹和他一起来的,因为她别无选择。当然,她是白化病,但他们并不介意。毕竟,世界上有很多白化病患者。我们没有上同一所学校,但是我从其他朋友那里听说他因为眼睛被欺负,尽管所有的欺负者都有残疾。我试着多和他说话,有一段时间,他不那么安静了,有时会对我的笑话微笑。我们越走越近,在我15岁和他14岁时成为了最好的朋友。但是上个月,当我们正在街上走的时候,他吓了我一跳。他的声音变得更加刺耳,他的举止也完全变了。赞恩,你想过离开这里吗?我转身看着他。没错杰你知道那是不可能的他真的笑了,但那不是杰有时给我的那种友好的微笑。这是虐待狂,疯狂,可怕。技术。我们可以杀了我们的方式离开这里。技术上没有人能阻止我们,除了那些警卫。哈。就像我关心他们一样。杰我们以前也经历过我们是畸形的。这就是我们来这里的原因。我们是不同的。他的笑容变得更加冷淡了。这不是一件好事吗?又不是我在乎自己的长相。我们已经谈过了,我觉得你是个**。他以前从来没有侮辱过任何人,甚至那些恶霸也没有,这让我有点恼火。杰伊,阻止它。你太不讲理了。你知道,那不是我的名字。我完全停了下来,然后叹了口气。这不好笑,杰登·史达琳。我告诉你。那不是我的名字。他也停下来,瞪着我。等待。那你是谁?杰吓了我一天,我开始认真对待他,看着他银色的眼睛。赞恩,你没听说过人格分裂吗?这就是为什么他们一开始就把我们送到这里来,只是我们把它藏起来了。杰还没告诉你吗?那他一定离你很近了。当他说那些话时,我能听到他声音里的讥讽。我摇摇头。杰从来没提过这件事。他一直很安静,害羞,对这个地方太好了。如果你想知道,我是乔纳森。比杰好多了,因为他是个懦夫。他翻了翻眼睛,把杰打发走了。这让我很生气。你竟敢侮辱我最好的朋友!哦,真的吗?你们是最好的朋友?我以为最好的朋友会告诉彼此所有的秘密。乔纳森冷笑道。我冻结了。我突然意识到。安妮。如果我打断这个话题会怎么样?安妮知道吗?乔纳森做了个鬼脸。当然不是!我还不至于粗心到把自己暴露给那个小女孩。杰让我答应的。他说那是件坏事。我很确定如果杰少保护他妹妹一点会发生什么。我松了口气,乔纳森又转了转眼睛。我又不是故意的。我不喜欢爱哭的孩子。那个女孩只不过是另一个顽童。约拿单就噎住了,眼睛闭上,两手攥成拳头。当他再次睁开眼睛时,他瞪着自己。你可别这么说安妮。永远。一次。周杰伦的声音又变软了,但这次充满了愤怒。他在自言自语。杰伊?我质疑,担心。他咬着嘴唇,惊恐地看了我一眼,就跑了。那是我最后一次见到他。你在新闻里说他会唱歌,听他唱歌会让你发疯。但我告诉你。那不是杰登·斯特林。这是乔纳森。所以别理他。


                IP属地:吉林8楼2019-06-03 18:25
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                  dd
                  期待故事后续呀:D


                  IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端9楼2019-06-03 22:10
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                    为什么是英文我英语只考三十分还是猜。 表示香不懂


                    来自手机贴吧10楼2019-06-15 09:41
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                      www很喜欢楼主写的呢,看到设子忍不住就画了……画的丑还请不要介意呀


                      IP属地:加拿大来自iPhone客户端11楼2019-06-15 21:06
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                        稍微在原基础上面改了一下www大概是第二人格的样子?果然我只能画丧病……


                        IP属地:加拿大来自iPhone客户端12楼2019-06-15 21:09
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                          把眼睛涂了一下,这样可以么?不过耳朵是怎么回事?因为之前说是普通人不过是双人格的样子


                          IP属地:加拿大来自iPhone客户端13楼2019-06-15 21:48
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                            啊啊,小枫自己画的....Jay的眼睛是WG3!我的找不到了、用的就是BG....


                            IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端14楼2019-06-16 12:48
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                              顺便,今天公布一些小资料吧!包括一些好像有些无关紧要的东西.....
                              Jay的生日是5月29号哦,而Jonathan却没有很明确的生日,毕竟只是一个人格。
                              Jay:生日很值得庆祝吗?好像只是一年中的一个日子罢了....*小声* 不过Annie每次都把好不容易弄到手的小蛋糕自己吃掉啊....(蛋糕这种东西,Jay他一般还是买不起的啦....真的很贵诶...小枫个人经验:蛋糕很贵)
                              Annie的生日是10月9号~
                              Annie:每年生日都有朋友们送的礼物~(≧▽≦)/~
                              Jay:好吧,你开心就好 *笑* (Jay 没有几个朋友,他也从没有告诉过Zane自己的生日)
                              这两个日子,都对小枫有比较特殊的意义呢!
                              最喜欢的食物:
                              Jay:好像没有什么喜欢吃的.....也好像不怎么吃东西.....
                              Annie:Jay,你就配合一下么!我最喜欢吃草莓了!
                              Jay:*被妹妹萌化* 那我的话,我还是喜欢咖啡....
                              Annie:咖啡不是食物!
                              Jay:*笑* 咖啡使用可可豆做的哦,和巧克力是一个东西。
                              Annie:巧克力!巧克力!!巧克力!!!
                              Jay:.....呃....你不是喜欢草莓么?哈哈,那下次给你巧克力蛋糕?(巧克力的更贵啊qwq)
                              Annie:还是要草莓的!诶嘿嘿,都喜欢啊!


                              IP属地:北京本楼含有高级字体15楼2019-06-17 19:19
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