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回复:【原创OC】Allen Worth(艾伦 沃尔斯)

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草,我死了,九子好強


来自Android客户端17楼2019-06-30 15:47
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    日语欸,,,好棒


    来自Android客户端18楼2019-07-02 07:40
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      dd


      来自Android客户端19楼2019-07-06 13:40
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        Sorry,I can't speak Japanese.
        It's a really wonderful character,he is really cool ~
        Does he have schizophrenia?
        Anyway,I can't wait to listen to what will happen next~


        IP属地:辽宁来自Android客户端20楼2019-07-07 21:44
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          是日本的太太www,总之先欢迎一下!welcome to china!剧情还稍微有点模糊,期待您继续的剧情!


          来自Android客户端21楼2019-07-08 20:14
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            sugoi


            IP属地:广西来自Android客户端23楼2019-07-16 10:29
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              帶話
              沯九暫時不會更新正文了,但是會更新番外艾倫和沃爾斯的日記


              来自Android客户端24楼2019-07-17 17:25
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                我需要在這裡説一句話。
                我受夠了,我不會再更新任何東西了。
                我不喜歡看著別人對任何我嚴格禁止的事情明知故犯,Allen起初是我最喜歡的一個OC,但卻被那些ooc同人毀了,而且我已經說過我不喜歡ooc設定,並且關閉了同人創作的授權了。我已經非常生氣了,我希望我不會再遇到這種事情了。


                来自Android客户端25楼2019-07-21 06:32
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                  最后一个更新(?
                  其实也不算吧,只是相关的,然后Allen的设定与名称都做了修改,全名改成了Allen Anderson,Worth改成了Anders,Allen的最后结局在kevin与Alpha的那个文章里等吧,这次用的是英语,但是我的英语真的非常差劲,将就着看吧
                  enjoy!
                  I tried to ask the girl why she committed the crime, and she smiled at me.
                  She told me that she had a friend because she lost her family and his own life.
                  Her name is Alpha. Her friend's name is Kevin Anderson.
                  She told me that although they are a family to outsiders, they do not have any blood relationship. She does not belong to this family. Therefore, she is not willing to call him "brother", but used to call him "friend", because she has no blood relationship with the family, she is often ridiculed by others at home. After that, she chose to run away from home.
                  "I hope he can forgive me for what I did, but it's too late." She murmured in a low voice.
                  I asked her why, but her expression suddenly became distorted and crazy.
                  She frantically shouted, "Let me out! I will kill all of you! "
                  If there were no chains, perhaps this girl would have torn me apart.
                  I am used to this kind of situation, but the girl's fast changing mood still scared me.
                  I calmed down and asked others about her story.
                  They also expressed some surprise at her affair, but all the facts were confirmed.
                  She killed her first person 10 years ago. Her first goal was the Anderson family, which had caused her great pain.
                  She got a gun on the black market and found her way to Anderson's room at night based on her broken memory. She first killed them on the first night, Hilly on the second night, and Icarus on the third day following the previous steps. On the fourth day, she fired two shots without realizing it, injuring Kevin.
                  The vertigo that followed made her forget the last person, Allen.
                  When she reacted, Allen had already lit the whole house.
                  She escaped from the house and went into hiding. She returned to the house the next day. She knew Kevin was okay and began looking for him.
                  But she didn't know Allen was alive. At that time, she only thought the fire was an accident.
                  It didn't take her much effort to find Kevin, who was seriously injured in the face because of the fire. When she found him, he was lying by the stump waiting to die. Kevin didn't know that all his family members had been killed by Alpha. Alpha had always been friendly to Kevin. She took Kevin to the hospital and then found a place to live. The two kept a peaceful relationship.
                  Kevin did not forget Allen until Allen was caught on suspicion of multiple murder cases, when he finally understood what he was going to do.
                  Alpha thinks what Kevin is going to do is too crazy and does not agree with him.
                  The story stopped here because Alpha did not continue with the next thing. A colleague told me that I should be careful with that girl. She was a little crazy, but I didn't care what she said.
                  But in the later work, I finally understood the meaning of "crazy".
                  Although she behaved naturally in prison, when you saw her behavior towards the guards, you wouldn't think so.
                  When the guards came to her room, she would rush to the door, stretch out her hand over the railing, grab any guards' clothes, smile eerily, or quietly tell him, "I will be free soon, and then I will kill you."
                  When I communicate with her in the same room, she must be bound, otherwise sometime she will do something to me.
                  After that, I really couldn't ask anything, so I turned to Allen who had been in this prison. Although he was dead, I could find all the files and information related to him.
                  I learned everything about him.
                  He started killing at the age of 13. . .
                  Extremely crazy. . .
                  Like to chop off the limbs of the victim. . .
                  Take away part of the victim's organs. . .
                  And eat these organs. . .
                  Seven consecutive years of crime. . .
                  I don't even know how to describe the boy.
                  Crazy?
                  Or
                  Action art?
                  I can't understand their thoughts.
                  Then I found his diary,
                  I didn't know the truth of everything until I read everything.
                  After he set fire to his home, a man named "Anders" appeared beside him. After investigation, he was confirmed as a personality of Allen.
                  1998.2.3
                  I have a presentiment that something bad will happen.
                  1998.2.4
                  The feeling of uneasiness became more intense.
                  1998.2.6
                  Both father and mother are dead.
                  1998.2.8
                  I feel like I'm about to collapse, leaving only my brother.
                  1998.2.12
                  No one else.
                  1998.3.7
                  Anders told me
                  It's time for revenge.


                  26楼2019-08-07 20:46
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                    非常棒!!!!!!


                    IP属地:河南27楼2019-08-09 21:54
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                      hey bro do u have a twi or deviantart
                      just ask I could look at some of ur other work


                      IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端28楼2019-08-27 00:46
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