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【诗】我又来发诗了(虐,慎入)

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                                            甲午泪
                            
                                                 抬头仰望
                                  千年沧桑沉浸于无边的水底
                                      血色残阳中悲愤的呐喊
                                          泪水已浸满了双颊
            
                                         水光匆匆行驶的航舰
                                          白旗红日触目惊心
                                            时间凝结在甲午
                                         海上碧波的悲壮豪迈
                                           又何知船中人已老
                                                   抬头仰望
                                                回忆历史苍茫
                                        光影之中血在水中交织弥漫
                                      旗帜上溅落的鲜血如漫舞的樱花
                                           存在的真切而又隐蔽
                                               眼能泣珠的鲛人
                                                     倚焦望月



1楼2010-06-24 22:23回复
         忆伤
                                                                      
                                 耀                                        菊
                      不曾回首的过往                                      无法忘怀的思
                      无法愈合的伤痛                                      止不住的泪水
                             血伤                                                         血债
                          不可泯灭                                                不敢忘却
                      
                          樱花散落                                               牡丹怒放
                      不知你是否仰望                                  不知你是否伫立
                            无法触碰                                                无法抓住
                  你的身影在我眼中消散                       你的笑容铭刻在我的心中
                       
                   鲜血染红了我的衣衫                            青丝盘绕在我的掌心
                   熟悉的体温变得陌生                            温柔的香味变得痛惜
                                                消逝年华,执手天涯
    


    2楼2010-06-24 22:24
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      3楼2010-06-25 11:11
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        貌似大多来耀吧都是发图的。。。
        发诗的甚少哦~~
        不过韵脚方面,我觉得还是要斟酌一下为好


        4楼2010-07-05 22:14
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