【熊熊至上】英语一模的作文写熊殿来着【不二周助吧】

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【熊熊至上】英语一模的作文写熊殿来着

新人第一次在这里发帖亲们多多关照^^
苦X的初三党一模考试的作文写到熊殿了哟~
题目是关于smile的然后我果断地想到了熊殿。。
只是毕竟是考场作文嘛。。不敢写的太那啥- -
文章很短大概不到100词？有点儿语法错误而且故事纯属瞎编乱造但有提到熊殿哟~
英语强大的亲们有空闲的话帮我纠正一下各种语法错误吧~感激不尽

作文满分15 我这个文章得了13分算是一类文了哟

啊哈哈~~！！小炫耀一下
咳咳 1L貌似说了太多 2L放文（？这个貌似不算是啥文吧- -）
如果写的真的太烂的话。。板砖轻拍

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1楼2012-05-08 21:55回复

In our life,we often get into trouble.Last term,I have failed in my math exam and I was very sad.I don't know why I have such many difficulties in the maths.Then,I cried.But soon,a boy came to me quietly and showed me a very beautiful smile.Suddenly,I felt warm."Don't be sad.Just try your best next time."He encouraged me.I stopped crying and smiled ,"Yes,I will."I said.After that,I asked his name and he told me that he called Fuji.We also became best friends.Thanks for your smile,Fuji.I will learn to be more brave in the future.

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2楼2012-05-08 21:55